Narrative Writing planning

FONUA HOUR PERSUASIVE

I believe that people should go to school because when your parents ask  you something to get from the shops but you don’t know what they mean.You can come  to school the next day and ask for help and right after school you can go home and tell your mum or dad you can go and that thing that they asked for. Do you want to More school time? 

I know that school changes your life. School is really good because when you go and learn lots of new things like right i am learning about grommets so far i have learned about is the tree of life. The tree of life is about animals evolving to survive. I am trying to get a better  life for me and my family.Once you come to everyday and keep on learning new things. Your life will become better and better. 

Do you want a better life for you and your family?

  School helps you with Attitude like for example you are a really bad child but when you go to school they will teach you a lesson about what bad thing you have been or what you have been showing. School is really in your life. School is one of the most important things in your life.

It is one of the most important in your life because if we didn't have school how would people learn without school Because There is one thing that you can do to learn but it is boring because why would everyone read a book for 6 hours a day.Like we all know school is  boring but it is better than having to read a book every day.

Task DESCRIPTION: 
This is your persuasive witting about School hour should we start earlier and   end later or have a short day at school.  This is my story about why we should  have a long day at school.

Voice typing story Telling

Hi my name is Zac i am from New Zealand. In New Zealand there is a
tradition that I didn't know about and it was called Matariki. So when
I went to school that morning i asked my teachers what was Matariki
and who is Matariki then she explained what was Matariki and who was
Matariki. So after about five mins she finished talking  about what was
Matariki and from that day forward I always remembered was matariki. 

So after school I went home and straight to my room and checked
my world globe it was shining I told my friend to come and see this.
His as fast as he could but he just lived next door so he wasn't really
tired from running he knocked on the door and Zac opened the door
and rushed up to his room. He said to his to come in he came and saw
the globe glow. He asked what were doing before and he answered that
he was just asking what is matariki and who is makariki. After two
minutes he's friend asked what is Matariki he said that Matariki is the
Mother of six  daughters and there names are  Tupu-ā-nuku,
Tupu-ā-rangi, Waipuna Rangi, Waitī and Waitā, and Ururangi. Matariki is the about
the Maori new year. It is celebrated on the 25th of June. and Matariki and her
six daughters are stars they are people. Wow said Zac’s friend you know all of that
in one day. 

Yes Zac replied because i’m a fast learner. WAIT!!! It the 25th June today So
we go and see where is Matariki and  her six daughters. What is the time it is
5:30pm why. We should get our stuff ready To go. 

Three hours later we should go now. They rushed up on top of a mountain and look in
to there telescope they looked everywhere and finally they found Matariki and her
six daughters. It was AMAZING  and cool they took a picture and came some to
their friends and family. They all loved the pictures so they went and did their own. 

                                THE END 

Informative Writing

WELLINGTON                           

THE BEACH

“In Wellington there is a beach nearby. Near  the park was a rugby field with a
basketball court. First they went straight  to the beach to get everything ready
like the barbecue, dinner table and the actives”.” After a while they finally
 finished getting everything ready for their picnic they all went off and Did
swimming they all played games on the beach like volleyball and ball tag
it was getting boring so we went out and got changed”.” If you went to `the
beach, what would you do”?

THE PARK

“After a while we all went to the and they  played games like infected tag and
hide and seek”.” After that they just played with the swings,slide,monkey’ bars
and the flying fox”. “ it was fun but it was like no on was the park it was like he
was the only one there. But when he looked beyond his  family was playing
with out him. What would you be doing if your family members just left playing
by yourself”.

                                                        

Information about North America

 NEW YORK    

Once there was a family that travelled around North America. First they went to

a city in america called New York . New York is the 2nd biggest city in North

America. They went past the Statue of Liberty National Monument it was really

cool and amazing there was someone  explaining all about it. It was really a

special statue it was like a piece of art it was real and it was 3d. The longitude

and latitude are 40.7128° N, 74.0060° W

                                     

  LOS ANGELES

After a whole week exploring New York they went to  Los Angeles that is the

3rd biggest City in North America and where the best to go to is

Disneyland park. It is one of the best parks to go in the world. It is really fun.

Million people go there every year after the best week at Los Angeles.

After the best weeks of his life he went to Mexico City. The longitude and

latitude are 34.0522° N, 118.2437° W

  MEXICO CITY

We went to Mexico City there is lot’s of different  things at Mexico might be one

of the best you have ever seen. Mexico city is the biggest city in North America

and did you that in mexico city they celebrate a day that is all about the day of

the dead. The day of the dead is when all the people remember the people that

have passed away.

Informative writting Final copy

THE STORY ABOUT NORTH AMERICA

Once there was a family that travelled around North America. first they went to
a city in america called. New York is the 2nd biggest city in North America.
They went past the Statue of Liberty National Monument it was really cool and
amazing there was explaining all about it. It was really special statue it was like
a piece of art it was real and it was 3d.

After a whole week exploring New York they went to  Los Angeles that is the
3rd biggest place in north America and where the best to go to is
Disneyland park. It is one of the best places to go in the world.
It is really fun.
Million people go there every year after the best week at Los Angeles.

We went to Mexico City there is lot’s of different  things at Mexico the might
be one of the best you have ever seen.

chose it final post

1. Tittle Mac Attack
2.  In the afternoon right after school finished i was on my home while I was walking home i saw a friend of mine his name is Mac he was Running away from the police and i was following him around and he finally stopped. the police went past him but they didn't knowest him that was him but i did. I went up to him and asked why were you running away from the police whispering I took some money from the bank as he was struggling to brive. why did you steal the money from the bank i quietly said. “because i didn't have any money for me and my family to eat and that as he started to cry”. “I said how much money did you steal”. “i stole 300k dollars”. “i said WHAT”!!! “Why would you steal 300k dollars you just wanted to buy food and that for you and your family you didn’t need that much money”. “he said i do because i want to buy everything i want.” “i whispered ok bye.” “A day later i woke up got ready to go to the Zoo got in the car with my mum and we went to the zoo after a while i saw Mac trying to steal a eagle.” When he saw me shouting his name out loud. The police chased him so they ran so fast as they could. “Just when got to him he jumped on to The eagle and lifted away without his money he cried in tear while he was blasting away form the police”. He stopped crying and got straight away. He was riding the eagle like it was a fly hover board. Y76 “He heard the police say hey Mac come and turn yourself in”. “NEVER i will always be a bad boy. he told the eagle stop but it didn’t it kept on going he went straight to it’s nest and ate mac alive. 
3.      THE END……..
4.  Sike it’s not the end there is more . Mac survived he didn’t die he faked the whole thing so the police couldn't chase him anymore but he was dead so he just needed a disguise to hide away from the police officer and everybody. But when he got home he saw his family picture and he said to himself that i can trust my family to keep a secret. When his family came back home they saw their dad they were really surprised that he was alive they thought that he was died but he had explain the whole story to them he got home he closed the curtains and locked all the doors and after that he takes off his disguise and stays home for 10 to 11 hours a day and leaves and comes back at 1:00 in the morning.

MAC ATTACK 1st draft

                                              Tittle

                  Mac Attack

In the afternoon right after school finished i was on my home while

I was walking home i saw a friend of mine his name is Mac he was
Running away from the police and i was following him around and he finally
stopped and the police went past him but they didn't know if that was
him but i did. I went up to him and asked why
were you running away from the police?

 I stole some money from the bank. Said Mac.

I said why did you steal the money from the bank?

because i didn't have any money for me and my family to eat and
that said Mac

I said how much money did you steal

i stole 300k dollars said Mac

i said WHAT!!! Why would  you steal 300k dollars you just wanted
to buy food and that  for you and your family you didn’t need that
much money.

he said i do because i want to buy everything i want and

i said ok bye.

A day later i woke up got ready to go to the zoo got in the car with my
mum and we went to the zoo after a while i saw mac trying to steal a
eagle. When he saw me say his name the police was chasing him because
i said he name so loud the police officer heard me so they run to get
mac but mac jumped on the eagle and lifted away and he forgot that
he lefted the money behind but the eagle just kept on going. He was
riding the  eagle like a hoverboard but the police was steal chasing
by car and helicopter they were everywhere he wanted the eagle to go
faster but it didn’t understand what he was saying. So the eagle went
to it’s nest and eat mac alive.

                             THE END……..  

Sike it’s not the end there is more haha!!!. Mac survived he didn’t die
he faked the whole thing  so the police couldn’t get him anymore but
he wasn’t died so he just needed a disguise to hide away from the
police officer and people. But when he go home he knew
 he could trust his family when he got home he closed
the curtains and locked all the doors and after that he
takes off his disguise and stays home for 10 to 11 hours
a day and leaves and comes back at 1:00 in the morning.

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i like your latitude

Today this morning it was the first day of term 2 we had a team Assembly at 8:30am. Then after that we went to the hall for Immersion Assembly where the hole was there. We went to the at 9:00am and finished at 10:00 am they all were talking about what we were going to learn about. We are going to learn about longitude and latitude. So 36.88 degrees south and 178.86 degrees east. We all are learning about I Like Your Latitude it is the picture.