Don’t Let Go!
Write a story using the picture above as inspiration. Is this the beginning of the story
or the end? Where is the carriage going and why? Who is the girl and how did she get
there? What’s the deal with the duck and lizard? Where do those stairs go behind them?
or the end? Where is the carriage going and why? Who is the girl and how did she get
there? What’s the deal with the duck and lizard? Where do those stairs go behind them?
Be creative….is it real life or fantasy? Sad or funny? Scary or possibly true?
EXPOSITION:
Who: paschal
Where: auckland Nz
When: last year
Hook:
BEGIN WRITING HERE:
Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl named paschal she was so pretty that she didn’t
need the other shoe for her other feet . She was so rich that she bought a big pumpkin. How
much do you think it cost a dollar fifty? Why does she have a duck and lizard is it her best
friend? Does she know that they can't talk? She must be crazy. Oh well
need the other shoe for her other feet . She was so rich that she bought a big pumpkin. How
much do you think it cost a dollar fifty? Why does she have a duck and lizard is it her best
friend? Does she know that they can't talk? She must be crazy. Oh well
“Ahhhhhhhh”
“Hello are you ok”
“What!!!”
“You are the girl in this picture i’m holding”
“What picture can i plz take a look”
“Oh i guess i am”
“Wait this picture show you coming just before”
“Yeah i guess so”
“What is your name my lady”
“ Paschal paschal from far far away a place called marist”
“What that means i created you wow”
“ No you dummy of course you didn’t create me”
“But how did this happen what are from the future”
“No!!! I'm not just a normal girl”
“So that means that this picture frame must tell the future”
“ but wait how can you change this picture”
“ wait i think this is it”
“Yasss
“ wait who is this”
“WAIT a minute that my evil stepmother and she on her way home i”m not gonna get
There in time my carriage is broken how am i supposed to get there now.
“Can’t you just run”
“ is too far to run”
“ how far is it”
“ why do you need to know”
“ because i think i can help”
“ how”
“Just wait”
“Hey sione we have been standing here for 10 mins.”
To be continued. Task description: we have been learning about adding dialogs in your stories.
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