Thursday 12 March 2020

the young detective


The Young Detective



It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate…  
 he asked himself where it was as he began looking for it. It was right in front of my eyes how I could have lost it. It was right there. I need to look for  it right now, said Adam. 

He asked his dad if he had seen it. Dad replied no where was the last time you saw it
, it was right in front of me then somehow it disappeared. What !!! 
I think there is something or someone in this house
“It is so creepy 
“I am with you and we have nothing to be afraid of”
“We are detectives. We can detect who stole the key”
. “Ok dad”.

we can do this with your skills nothing can go past us wssssss as someone or something went past us
“ what was that “. 
 “I don’t know. It is ok it can’t get the best of us”. 
“We make a good team and we can do anything”.
“ Ok first we have to find out why this thing what the key does it opens something amazing let’s  make sure that we find that thing before it opens something that we don’t know about”. Let's go and investigate said both of them 
To be continued 
task description: this is our writing for this week we had continue with a unfinished story. my writing is the one with black.

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